The changes that I have made
- The character on the left leaned against the wall and crossed his hands to remain disdainful.
- The character on the right has his hands akimbo, putting the weight into the hips, which shows that he is very angry.
- The distance between the two characters is short, which makes the quarrel more intense.
- The right character is held by the left character before he is ready to turn around to walk away. Neither of them has much space to move.
- When the character on the left is blaming, the spine is straight. He straightened out his chest and pressed his hand straight into the chest of the character on the right side. He was the strong side.
- The character on the right is less powerful and slowly curls up.
- The distance between the two people is always very close, in the process of accusation, both people are slowly retreating.
- The rest part of the content is cut off, and the action of the left character lifting the collar of the right character is added so that is the ending pose.
Feedback: More exaggerated expression of angry emotions, not just body language, expression can be enriched.
Furious
Face squash and stretch with angry expression
Another point is that I didn’t say my lines directly when I was performing, which required me to look at the original video clips for inspiration.
Several points to pay attention to about expression
- The distance between the two eyebrows becomes shorter and tends to squeeze downward
- The facial features press towards the middle
- Apple muscle upward extrusion
- pupil dilation with changes in eye size
- Exaggerate the shape of teeth and mouth
The other change I want to make is that when the left character criticizes, I will try to make his body incline forward, but at the same time, I will make sure that her spine is straight. I think some of the references are too straight. Although I didn’t play very well, I will pay attention to this.
The next step is that I will choose the appropriate role model to start the blocking process combined with the above references and suggestions.